This piece was done exceptionally well in my opinion. It had everything it needed. Good shadowing, a cute woman, and of course wonderful breasts. Her hair is pretty killer to with all of the detail and coloring of it.
Don't get me wrong, this is a great drawing but I have two things that I find a slight bit odd:
- The leg to her left (the one laying on the floor) seems to rounded. It almost looks like she's lacking a knee.
- Her belly looks fine, but where her clothing is opened, the brown inside I think should have some creases or wrinkles in it. I just think it would make it look a little better (I hope you understand what I'm trying to say).
Above all it's a job well done I'd say. Keep up the fantastic work.