Now this is quite lovely-I think I see aspiration in his eyes... and I can't help but love the mix of color for the sky you chose.
I think it got shorter and more muscular. And you added clothes to it (scarf).
Were these before?
I think you're trying to show that it's either furry or feathery. Not smooth, at least. And holy crap, you depicted electricity pillars in the background?
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