This is absolutely excellent, love the composition and grainy feel.
My only critique would have to do with the lighting. Since the most powerful source of light in the picture is coming from the characters hand the monster (I'm assuming Deadline is the monster) should be at least partially lit up with the colour of light. If you do that you can change over the rim light to a different colour (like a cold light blue) for added contrast and interest.
this is great, i love the colors