I *really* adore the linework on these. Yes, it's not perfect if I zoom in like a prick, but taken how the composition of the set consists of a lot of things to be taken in at once, it absolutely evens out. For instance, in this one there's the manly hands galore, the dynamic poses, the detailed outfits, the expressions, the background; it's all kept very easy on the eyes to soak in as opposed to simply feeling busy/overwhelming.
I'm not sure how long it took you, but seeing as you've effectively made a 5 piece long set of these whilst keeping consistent quality without destroying your wrist I need to give it kudos; great job man.