He certainly looks prepared to live up to his name. Sounds like something I'd read if given the chance.
It needs a little more color and background. You have a nice art style. I read your comment good idea it reminds me of Johnny the homicidal maniac though but over it is a great idea and blown me away. I hope to see more.
Opinions and criticism are always welcome but this is just absolutely childish. After looking at the crap you've posted for art its no wonder you failed to be scouted yet :)
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