LET'S GET YOUR CRITICISMS OUT OF THE WAY RIGHT NOW!!!
I'm aware that this isn't the most beautifully drawn comic in the land. It was not meant to be that way! Slappy Toons is simply a fun thing I'm doing to put out content and give someone a laugh.
All that being said, judge this not on it's look (as I'm sure it will be changing anyway) and judge it more on the fact on if it's funny or not.
Judge my paneling
Judge my word choice
Judge the character design.
But any judgements on art is just a waste of time at the moment.