Lots going on in this one.
I was kind of happy to see this piece front-paged it was a random choice but also well deserving so nice work there on that award type, hope you get more like that in the future, I start off this review and its pretty awsome that you can find stuff like this, theres lost to see and admire, and i do enjoy some detail and love that its abit on the artistic side but then again most art is. So this was neat i like these types and they do look god in the black and white style, some things were hard to see as it was in black and white though, it was a good piece though, as for improvment i dont know i kind of like it, theres lots of nice detail, im big on "COLOR" so maybe some stuff an be colored or all of it. And its always stuff like you have presented here that i really enjoy, there was lots to see in this one and there was some good showen effort on your part, now doesnt say that there cant be some more effort but thats for later, anyways decent art piece here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So anyways some slight improvments could be done, and it never hurts to try a few new additions, so i do hope the added suggestions will help on improving on this. But as i look at it it was ok some bundled up designs in there, and maybe some added color for later, but it was a pretty good piece.