It's kind of hard to see where certain shapes end and where others begin, maybe because the black from the ink is so strong, it would look more realistic if certain parts were drawn with a pencil. I think it's hard to see it, but once i looked at the whole picture it really shows what a great idea you had, and I'm just amazed at how you can put something from your mind onto paper. :)
Yeah the excess of dark segments make it harder to 'read', I got used to just having one pen for everything, but a lighter one could help differentiate some bits.
Great that you dropped by on this older drawing! I haven't done stuff in this darker and detailed style in quite a while, I'll have to get back at some point :D
It is really great when you can put an idea in your head onto paper. Awesome piece.
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