The concept and idea is a good but the execution isn't exactly as good. The lighting seems good but your blend of colors, anatomy, and texturing isn't the best. I think the reliance of bold outlines instead of textuirng creates an odd feel to it. Try studying more examples of what in saying. I'm sure you can create pretty awesome content as you improve. Keep creating friend!
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