ah good ol erza my fav character in the series :> gj on the art
the shadow... look dude i'm no artist myself but... its kinda hurting my head a bit. also if your doing perspective i recommend making the tits POP OUT at me. you'll automatically get better reviews.
Pauldrons should be flatter and shorter(If setting is like that it's not your fault)
Hair dispersal is weird(hair locks should not all be sharp-ended,should have flat-ended locks or something)
Why is there a thin black line above her head in her hair?
Cool hair shading and perspective & depth!
Two-hours drawings ain't good and there is such beautiful perspective & depth, so at least spend more time on it to correct it, absorb previous criticism and improve.
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Flat-ended hair locks added
Need to get better Pauldron design(Go to Wikipedia or Google)
This is kind of weird looking. How come it seems like her left eye has a bigger tear duct than the right eye? The ground doesn't match her perspective either. Her arms look constipated and need to be a little more out.
the tears. yeah i was kinda wondering about this fact too! im pretty sure i ..oh wait THERE IS AN EXPLAINING! one of erzas eyes is fake :3333
i still need to work in the prespective view. im an amateur haha >:D
Only 2 hours. and it shows.
Study Light on Form. You don't seem to understand it all that well.
"lol i cant believe this i hate my mood change!! i wish i wasnt such a freak"
yeah this a good fact you made there il try to put more time into work and im aware of the light source thing
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