So its only once in awhile that we find something thats interesting and unique on the portal, and thats what i have randomly found here today, you have outdone yourself with this unique piece. Fabtastic piece of fantasy art here kind reminds me a lil bit of a diablo barbarian, the girl is cute but maybe if she is a warior of some sort she should have some battle scars and even some more grungy looking skin and hair, just a thought, but overall this was still a pretty good piece, just needs some battle mark ups. And as i end thin i will say that it was a pleasure finding this piece, the portal has many amazing art pieces including what you have created today.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as for some type of improvments, Well ill suggest a few ideas, but for themostpart you seemed to have the right idea and direction down, but here is something that may or may not help in that direction of improvment. So as mentioned some battle scars and more grunjy look would be nice.