i agree with the shading, in normal view it is not all that bad but once you zoom in on it... seeing the shaded areas are a painful pink on there skin... but other besides that i think was a good job on it... keep it up
The shading is blehhh :T for lake of a better word. Also the blond girls eyes are not even. I think If u looked up the Loomis method of drawing it would benefit you greatly.
thanks for the input
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