This is a little better....
This looks like you put a little more time into it but it still looks like it was rushed. Once again, your lines are inconstistent and your anatomy is a little off point. Nice work on the shadowing though. Try penciling your work first if you aren't already doing it, and then ink it. That will make your pics look a lot better.
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