I read the other comments first but even in that view you would still get more of the top of the head- well that's most peoples thoughts but its actually the eyes that are too far up. Her right thigh even though it is made bigger because of perspective it still seems a tad too big. The coloring and attention to detail are the things I admire most. I hope this does not come off as too critical. I would also love to know what medium(s) you used.
I mean, this got front page, so I expect people to be critical. Whenever anyone's (me being no exception) work get's that sort of attention, there's always people that are gonna either question or protest whether or not. The head, I can admit (and have) that its a bit off, but its nothing too crazy. Though,I can see how that'd put someone off.
The thigh, I'd defend that a bit more adamantly. I feel those are pretty solid given the perspective. However, the way its cropped and how close the color of her skin is to her skirt has it looking a bit off at first glace.
Regardless, I welcome the criticism, because it lets me know how well educated my audience is, and they enjoy my work enough to tell me what they like and what they're bothered by when looking at it. I've been doing it a long time, but I can always stand to get better. So its something I'm going to keep in consideration for the future. Thanks for the critique.
Amazing work, great colors, but most of all, wonderful design work! Only thing wrong with this picture is that the head is missing perspective. We should be seeing up under her jawbone a little, and the entire face pushed up a bit. This way, her head is given more of a 3D context, along with the rest of her body.
I realized way too after the fact that I didn't change it. Initially, her mouth was opened a lot more than pictured here. Provided, I'd argue seeing under her jawline, it should still be about to where the viewer can't see over it either. This is just one of those situations where we got a little too far along, and too much was done to go back and fix it.
i see what template is saying, but its still dope regardless, keep doing dope shit man, the kanye west way.
Dude this is spectacular dawg! BEAST-MODE ZELDAAA!!!!
Rendered cool, perspective is cool but it looks like the face was made separate from the rest of the image, shes got no forehead/top of her head, the facial proportions are off and it really ruins what is otherwise a really cool drawing.
Perspective, my friend.
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