the colors are really pretty. But the shading on the skirt is too light and could be made a lot darker/harsher, but the shading on the hair and the eye was done well. linework overall is smooth but a better demonstration of lineweight could be done here. all lines as is are the same/near the same thickness. and there are several places i can see where the ends of the lines could be cleaned up all around but especially on the bottom of the skirt and in the facial area.
Hey, thank you for your helpful comment! I made a small update based on some of your points! Thank you very much!
Nice drawing, the color scheme and lighting are great.
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