- overly reliant on warm colors
- inconsistent cel lighting
- boring composition and lazy leg fadeout
- terrible metal shine effect/highlights
- virtually no texture, which especially makes the beard look weird
- right guy's ear is too low
- lineart too hard
- left guy's sword handle doesn't seem affected by shadows/lighting correctly and its scabbard is even worse
- stiff poses
- uncanny laugh
- some really weird facial structures like the left dude's broad chin
- right dude's smirk doesn't draw a shadow at all
Wow, writing this, I really realize I need to get my shit together.
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