D'aww, it's a shame this doesn't have more reviews. Admittingly I came here because I thought I spotted an art thief from the thumbnail, but I find myself happily mistaken. c: Similar, but not enough. Odd coincidences happen at odd times, I suppose~
WELL while I'm here I might as well give some advice, even though I see it's slightly old. But a half a month isn't too far off.
I honestly do like your style, and the fact that you're actually drawing the -hands- instead of always having them behind your character. It's also good that you're incorporating accessories and markings into the design; i feel like I don't see enough of that in designs elsewhere. You've gotten the hang of the light source it seems, as it all comes from one direction, even in the hair. Which. DOES have a highlight, but I recommend adding some shading as well.
One thing you might want to pay attention to is the width of the hips. They normally do not look right when they are wider than the bust, and it also makes it really easy to make the thighs too large as well. It's almost like, when you look at the upper half, it's wonderfully done when it comes down to anatomy, and by itself, the lower does as well. But together, the top half looks too small for the lower half. The shading seems almost flat, but defined. Remember that there are some "hard shadows" and some "soft shadows" displayed everywhere on the character.
I hope this helps you, if only a little bit. ^^
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