The shading of the face is striking, but my, what big eyes she has! If it's from the lenses, I'd tweak the left eye (within the lens), left more... so it seems to have an amplifying effect for both eyes.
The fingers at the upper neck look a little too curvy, but the framing of the face and hair is spot on!
Fingers are saying "stop choking me" but nice drawing.
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