This looks great! I'm not an artist myself so I can't speak intelligently about drawing, but I can still see improvement. Please keep at this. You've got the beginning of a really interesting story here, and the art just keeps getting better. Don't let mistakes you see after the fact deter you. You're growing as an artist. :D

Yes.

These are getting better and better all the time. Were you not happy with the tummy?
Pretty sparse dialog so far, but what you've been saying is damn compelling.
I've seen one or two comic books that were in a similar style to this in the past, btw... but that doesn't detract in teh slightest, what you've accomplished so far. Dern proud of you dude.