the character was the main focus here which seems very welldone, but that building in the backround doesnt match to well, the main character has a 3d feel while the building is more of a "FLAT" feel to it and all
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on making the building not look so flat it needs some sorta 3d portions so that it all matches with the character at hand
Thank ya very much ^_^
Yeah, I need to work on my backgrounds for sure. >_<
This is just my opinion. The concept of a super rat with a cheese ax just doesn't appeal to me. Neither does the cartoonish 50's comic book background. But I give it a 3 for effort and creativity. For me, it would've been better "darker". Add a bit more shadows and dark colors so I can take your superhero a bit more seriously. Or you could've made him into a twisted criminal that you'd only see in a Batman comic. A bit more detail and "cold, dark city"-ish theme would help too. Like wind carrying dead leaves or a few pieces of paper. Or a few birds flying above. A full moon and a more detailed sky would also add to the effect.
Hey, this is just my opinion, it is after all, my review. :)
Your opinion is valued ^_^.
I was thinking of doing another one with that "cold, dark city" feel that you described. Problem is I need more practice with backgrounds. So I'm working on it.
The character isn't really dark. Much more like Peter Parker than Bruce Wayne. I liked the contrast of the stigma of his abilities (being a rat) and his personality and values. I try to show that by giving his apperance a lighter feel too it (the big ears, and cheese axe). Maybe I missed the mark there.
I'm glad you made that statment about not taking him seriously or him not appealing to you. In the story he is seen as a joke, or expected to be a criminal. This of course creates conflict with the charcter in the plot.
Thanks for the review!
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