I think its definitely a good start in the right direction, try adding more shadings to the facial expression, both with lighter and darker colors, it'll definitely give the face a lot more depth. If you need any recommendations about where to start I'd say watch Jazza's "Painting with Brushes in Photoshop."
Wow thanks! didn't expect anyone to see this, nor did I expect such a helpful review!
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