It's coming along, and has some cool aspects. However, please finish it before submitting. Seeing the same thing, multiple times, with only a slight improvement each time, actually makes your viewers' appreciation diminish. The more times you show it, the more they'll get used to it, and eventually, get bored with it. Have fun. Do great. Let your creativity flow. And when you're done, THEN submit it to raves and faves. Much better than, 'oh, here's another version of this...', right?
Also, please remove the older version when a newer version is put up. There's no need for 5 versions of the same thing up, for the reasons I just went over, but also because it's unnecessary and wastes time and space.