Cramming in a thousand Vs and dots around an awkward drawing does not create good art. Some of your other stuff is improving, but I can't fathom how this got onto the art portal. The guy looks stilted, awkward, and a little clueless. The background is just an overload of detail that is just scrawls in and of itself. Dark words didn't help it much, either. Like the previous guy said, sketch it out--plan it, shape it, organize it.
Try drawing some real people, limbs, hands, backgrounds, or even tracing or copying to learn some anatomy and background shading. It'd be good practice, and I guarantee you it's going to be embarrassing when you look back on this, after you improve. Aim higher, and get some models to work with, or print out some anime or manga pics, if that's your style.