Er...

Cramming in a thousand Vs and dots around an awkward drawing does not create good art. Some of your other stuff is improving, but I can't fathom how this got onto the art portal. The guy looks stilted, awkward, and a little clueless. The background is just an overload of detail that is just scrawls in and of itself. Dark words didn't help it much, either. Like the previous guy said, sketch it out--plan it, shape it, organize it.

Try drawing some real people, limbs, hands, backgrounds, or even tracing or copying to learn some anatomy and background shading. It'd be good practice, and I guarantee you it's going to be embarrassing when you look back on this, after you improve. Aim higher, and get some models to work with, or print out some anime or manga pics, if that's your style.

Just practice!

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Not really that good. First of all, I can tell you really didn't bother sketching before you drew this. Second of all, you chose dark words, or as some would call them, emo, but you didn't back it up with the theme. Lastly, well , your style needs some reworking, and I mean a lot. It just isn't pretty to look at. I could of drawn this when I was ten. I mean the spikes on the floor look like banana peels. The background dots look horrible, not to mention that they don't add anything to the picture. The straight to pen style that I know and love looks like absolute shit. And your character, well apart from having a backwards rib cage, looks mentally retarded.

But, I can tell this project was rushed, and you probably didn't give this the most attention, so I am going to give you the benefit of the doubt as an artist. Next time you decide to sumbit something, put time and effort into it. Add some color, refine your curves, add shading, etc.

Final Score:
1/10