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Self Portrait- Tragedy

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"Self Portrait- Tragedy"
Compressed and vine charcoal
April 2009
www.laurakerger.com

- 1 of 4 of a series of self portraits I made for my life drawing class final.

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very nice compositioning

i really like the rendering on this.. but as i said before.. i think you should add more depth to the hair to add a bit more to it.. this one gets my 5/5.. nice work..


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Very well done

Your picture was very well done. For next time though, try to get more contrast into the picture as well as adding more detail to the background, even if only a window. I looked at a couple of your other pictures as well, also very well done, keep it up.


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ArtistGamerGal responds:

agreed on the contrast- I don't really see the need for a background since I personally find them to be distracting at times. But perhaps just a suggestion of an environment behind the figure would help. Thanks :)


You...

Want some Prozac?

But, yeah, that picture captured tragedy really well.


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Pretty Good

The overall picture is very well done! The background could have had a bit more detail (as Nahuije said), the cheeks could have more shade, the part connecting the nose and the forehead is a bit too sharp, but that's mostly it! Excellent!


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Good

I think the background could be better, but anyway excellent job!!you are heavy weight artist.

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