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Jezelle - Chroma Black

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A character design for the original series idea I'm planning- Chroma Black

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looks wicked dude!!! good luck with the project!!!

ArtistGamerGal responds:

Thanks!

I'm glad to read that you're planning a new series!
I’m looking forward to see it. :)

About the character:
I like the colors, they match really good.
The cape is interesting, especially the "plus" symbol. Is she a medic? (If yes I would recommend to change the color of the circle and the plus sign into white & red.)
I dislike the hands; it reminds me of a claw... (Maybe less pointy and/or more fingers?)
Also I don't like these shoes. It looks really painful to walk with something with this. (But in real life there are shoes that are even more painful, am I right? ^^)
I love the clothes. The tie and the shoulder-things look badass.
Last but not least the eyes: DAMN they are magnificent.

ArtistGamerGal responds:

Thanks for the feedback! It may be awhile before you see the first episode since I am still in the planning stages, but I promise you will eventually!!!

You nailed it! She is a doctor's apprentice in the story, so not quite a full medic yet, but on the way. I considered a pallete that included red and white just so I could make the symbol be its traditional colors, but ended up liking this one better and didn't want it to break the pallete just for the symbol and have it pop out too much.

I'll work on refining the hands so they look less claw-like. I want them to be pointy, but perhaps thinner fingers would help. I personally hate high heels, but it's a thing with the character that she always wears high heels (despite them being super uncomfortable lol)

I'm so glad you like the eyes! They were one of the first things I nailed down (other than her hair) early in her development :)

The concept is good. Howerver, I feel like she is somewhat disbalanced because of her huge head. Maybe making her a tad taller would fix this. As for the colors, I love the palette you used. I'm not sure about the litle cape-thingy on her shoulder. I don't know, it just somewhat seems a bit cliché. Anyway, overall, it think this character is great and I totally see her bossing everyone around :)

ArtistGamerGal responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback!

The large head may feel a bit more in place once you see her with other characters from this world since they all kind of have crazy proportions, but I will certainly take that into consideration! She is on the extreme side of "tall and skinny" in this world.

I'm really glad you like the palette! I wasn't totally sure about the cape thing and may not have her wear it all the time being as it isn't super practical anyway :p

And you totally nailed her personality! Thanks for the feedback!

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