So Far this is one of the worse ones I have seen from your profile, and I have only seen 3 so far,
Anatomy Is shot. You really need to get a tutorial.
Composition isn't great and you have a lot of blank space floating about. I see some lines on the ground that I assume to be shadows, but its not enough.
Crop the white space, work on your design and line work and Composition. Your better off scrapping this and having a complete redo.
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