ya i would have to agree with Zetrystan too, also that the drawings is a bit stiff, but other then that its really good.
keep it up
Good work on the colors! You actually should try using color combos like the ones in the background to test on your characters! It will bring them some life, which is always fun with flashy colors.
Just beware of the thickness of the lineart. It's usually better to change between thicker and thiner lines to give more dynamism to drawings. :)
Awesome! Thank you for the critic! I'll be sure to experiment with colors to give my characters some life as you've suggested! One question though, how should I use the line thickness? Any examples?
Either way, thank you so much for the critic once again, I honestly appreciate it and I'm glad to hear that you appreciated my critic as well, despite me not being anywhere near as good as you.
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