Nice. This is jus' me, but th' :3 looks rather painful. Turn it down a notch.
Seriously not bad at all. Really only one suggestion, and this isn't meant to be perverted at all, I would say to give her bigger boobs. She almost looks like a 13 or 14 year old. But if that's what you are going for then great!
hahaha now that I see it, if it looks a little younger than I initially wanted, but do not want such an old character, would a girl about 25 years old what I wanted to do. thanks :)
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