Think the introduction speaks for its self of what this comic is about.
Feedback would be quite helpful, as it won’t be too much longer before I must have a portfolio review. These reviews are importuned as this will allow an art student to remain an art student or be booted from the art program altogether. Please be polite but if you notice something especially if you are a grammar-nazi please point it out. As all art students have the chance to fix up anything they feel is not quite up to part.
This is importuned to me as I would like to go the extra mile and turn this into an actual comic book for the portfolio.
Thank you to anyone who leaves constructive criticism down below.