Nice
This was pretty cool the afro came out nice the shine on the glasses are nice would have loved more of a sparkle on top of that nice character work
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Jerry: Old and New
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The one from '09 was the first thing I drew with my tablet, and not too long ago I decided to breathe some fresh air into one of my first characters that I gave life to.
Any tips and advice are appreciated.
Nice to see both submissions on the same page and compare the differences! The right one definately looks better than the left. He doesn't just look better defined but also bigger, but at the same time it's like two different styles in the different pictures. One thing I thought was pretty cool with the 09 version were the blue glasses, they really glow. On the right one they do look more realistic, but the whole picture is also dark, I feel it would be nice with some color added!
The black line separating the lips on the right one looks a bit odd when there aren't any real outlines elsewhere, otherwise it looks great, the facial features look realistic and professional, as does the shirt. The afro looks.. unreal, but then again, don't all afros? :) Much better shading on the hair in the new one! Keep it going!
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animezoneking responds:
Thank you :) This is the style I have been working with, but I like the idea of more vibrant colors, I will more than likely make a new one soon that balances the styles. Thank you for the critique, I appreciate it a lot! :)
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