The only problem I have is with the wrist, it appears broken, other than that its great.
I can see it :)
Thanks, for the pointer!
Very cute. I've never understood the whole overlay thing that you can see near the bottom right of the image, but the linework and coloration is really top-notch. The face and hair really turned out perfectly.
The cloth looks a little odd near the shaded bit at the bottom, which kind of threw me off - the shaded area is too stark a contrast in my opinion, and it doesn't really make sense how that one particular area is more shaded. Moving up the picture, you can see the hand that is reaching out has something strange going on around the wrist - the crease of her thumb protrudes too far into her palm. Finally, the model's right shoulder and neck are somewhat off. The neck looks as if it's way too far to the left, while the longer right shoulder is left with a strange meaty section that creates a strange indentation at the deltoid.
Wow... I am SO GLAD that you have taken the time to make an in-depth review. I REALLY APPRECIATE the honesty, and the tips that I KNOW will help me improve.
Take a look at my Bongcheon-Dong ghost painting, as an example. People were so harsh on me, when I uploaded my first rough sketch of her, and DID my VERY BEST to make it look as identical as possible, and I did because of the critics.
Again; thank you, so much! :)
Amazing improvement! Love it.
Thank you :)
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