I give you credit on the dick suck speech. I'm not fucking around. I think the art is decent and all, but girls really do sound funny as fuck when they talk while they're deepthroating. I've had a few girls try to hold conversations while sucking me and it never fails to be funny. They are so serious in telling you it hurts or is uncomfortable and you don't mean the laughter to come off mean or even at them, but it's the way they are talking so confidently, so serious, so normal.
You executed that part well. I just wish it were a video now so we could hear it. I'm sure Miss Moonified could pull that off quite well. She's the best there is.