may i suggest something????
I love your work.. the only complaint that i have is that there is too much to look at. you don't have a dominate... to correct this it is supper simple. when you go to ink every thing use different pen points or pigment liners. Use a .7 for the out side of the character, a .5 for over lapping points on the character, .3 for small over lap like fabric, and lastly use a .1 on your detail line work... back grounds are normally bigger point to the foreground and smaller point to the back ground. if you do this your art will pop... if you do that i am sure you'll get a 10 from me in the future.. :P hope that helps