I would have givin a ten if the one with the bigger boobs was getting licked.
I see that you've cleaned up the lines a lot. What I would consider you doing is adding some more shading to make the perspective and proportion look better. Also, I think some areas below your waist in this artwork need a little bit of adjusting. This pic is sexy if that's what you're going for, but, if you correct some proportions and shading, it will probably have even more sex appeal (giggity).
I really do like it better with the leg in front
I still think it's missing some form of flare...
It's not bad, but it just needs more detail. ;)
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