The line that makes up her left breast could've been drawn better. Also, her breasts don't look very proportional. Other than that, awesome drawing. Very hot.
This is the second piece of your work that I looked at because I wanted to see if you have the same problem in other works and yes. You indeed do. Unless her breasts are fake they shouldn't be defying gravity like that especially her left one. Her torso is too long and doesn't fit. Which is also the case in your attempt of Orihime. One leg seems chunkier than the other. Nice vagina though. I wish you would have made a little more texture there. Not too much though because that's one thing that kills it for me with most hentai is the ridiculous amount of unneeded texture in the vag area. I'm not going to troll all of your work.
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reminds me of plant rape.... why..?? i guess it cause of the green hair...im not much of a perv... but its just the green hair man.... THE GREEN FUKN HAIRR!!!!
This is the best of your "A" works. they could be better, all of them, but i wasn't planning to put that on all of them. Anyway, very well done!
Did you get the idea for legend of zelda?
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