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Annika's soul turns violent...

Critiques welcome.

EDIT: Okay! Updated with some of the changes people suggested to me. Feel free to tell me it still looks like crap, haha.

EDIT: Edited again with some really minor fixes.

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This is the third work of yours I've seen with this character (I am assuming its the same character). Is she the same? If so, does she have a name? If not, I noticed the pendant on all three are the same, is there certain meaning you have prescribed to that detail? I don't mean to pry, I just love hearing artist's take on their own work and processes.

GREAT piece, as always.



Why boob plate? 0 star.

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I think this is sick mate!

Good stuff!



This is a very cool picture. There is one thing that bugs me though. The head seems out of place for some reason. It could be the coloring. I think the chroma is too high. If you were to make it mid to low chroma, I think it would fit the rest of the picture better. As for the position of the head, it should be a little higher. Her torso isn't leaning forward, so her head should be pulled up a little bit.

I'm not too certain of the figure critique, but I do know that the coloring doesn't quite match up as the background is mid chroma, the foreground is mid to low chroma, her legs and most of the torso is mid chroma and only the face has high chroma colors. This may be intentional but I think it makes the face stand out a little too much. Perhaps that blush on the her right cheek should be toned down a little.


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I have no idea what problem "hunting prey" has with this, I guess the doofus has never been in combat before and does not understand her head is more than likely in a leaning in a forward position towards her target. This is truly a masterpiece of warfare, also it kinds reminds me of me beloved Sabrina, I know I am a lucky bastard.

In closing my only suggestion is to make her face smaller by a 6th of it's size. In closing I love your work!


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AlvinHew
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