I like this.
You shouldn't shoot yourself down, because the talent is there. If you wanna make that comic then just do it. I don't know if I like the art style, but the concept seems interesting. Now I want to do some concept sketches for a series I'd love to animate. I have the script of the 1st and 2nd episodes done, but now I have to ANIMATE them. I really have to do it for myself because I practically never finish anything. So like, if it still means anything to you then maybe write a script... at least get that part done. From there you can decide what you wanna do with it.