Was this ever made into a real comic? It's been literally years since you made this. I would love to see your take on it. It seems like it would work better as a comic. Maybe that's just because I've never seen you animate like this. If nothing else, this is great for a start.
I still think Hank looks a tad off. I think it works better here. You seem to have gotten rid of the cross lines altogether. I love how the words are arranged like this. It's just a cool effect.