The artwork is as good as usual. I like how you mention Ohio and Michigan. Lloyd looks like the cereal guy. He's another one of those characters from ragecomics. There are so many of them. I guess you just make these in a series.
It's good to know you're always up to it. He has a pretty funny hat. I probably have been to Michigan at some point. It's at least near Minnesota, where my aunt and uncle live. Yeah, we have a family of travelers.
I think you could turn up the contrast some places, specifically for the speech bubble in the last frame, and the beard of jake.
Otherwise the style is pretty simple, but I suppose that's cool
3 for 3
10 for acknnowledging that even Ohio is better than Michigan.
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