umm im am so sorry but there is a thing that my graphic design teacher taught me, and that is the 3 second rule.
Rule states that if it takes more than 3 seconds to figure out what it is then the design, artstyle, or even the color options need to be reconsidered. sorry if this comment is not as constructive as the guy below me. =) keep up the good work.
haha this is definitely a lot more constructive! and you're right, this piece probably is a little too vague.
thanks for the constructive criticism
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