I really like the composition of the picture. How every object and character is placed in a dynamic way. With exception of the egiptian-looking lady in the background, but its ok i guess since it is a minor character in this picture.
The colors are warm, however, despite being two explosions in the picture, it looks like they don't produce much light, as there's barely any reflection of the yellow and red light that these should produce. Making the drawing feel somewhat "cold" to what one might expect from an action packed, ship-exploding scene.
Another thing to point out is the right foot of the main girl, wich kinda looks odd for both its rather small and sharp shape, and the direction is poining towards.
But with nothing else, i find this drawing a really good work, it has everything you might want in an action scene: Guns, jumps, drones, explosions, and chicks.
To summarize: Good action scene. Explosions don't seem to produce light here.