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Clair slashing rats

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My first mockup ever, I'm also participating on pixelday2020!

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It's got all the components, the info on the sides of the screen, the background details tp sell it, the action being done. The colors are nice and the red barrels are a nice touch of excitement but they don't overpower the rest. I feel like it's missing some stuff in the foreground, though It's bit empty and needs more kinetic energy in my opinion. Maybe more flourish and force demonstrated in the swing would have done it.
Either way, good job on your first mockup and thanks for contributing to Pixel Day!

AlcaNG responds:

Hello! First of all thanks for taking all this time to write that review, everything you said it's usefull and well criticized. I rlly had a hard time trying to animate it, after effects with gifs is horrible, so I kept this static mockup, but I'm still satisfied with the result, I also learned a lot!

Thanks again for your tips, next time I'll do better!

*Claps hand in approval*

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AlcaNG
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Score
4.59 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 22, 2020
2:11 PM EST
Category
Illustration
File Info
886 x 688 px
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32.7 KB

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