Sword is well done, rest...
Her right arm is way way too long, if it was straight it would go down to her knees, it comes back way too far. The bits behind her knees are a bit too defined, makes her legs look a bit butch almost, her right leg gets a bit too wide on the right side once you pass that point as well. Her face is too long as well, the jaw looks plain messed up, waist is a tad too thin as well methinks, and her neck is too long. The ear is too big as well, her hair needs to be a more consistent thickness as well, it goes all thin in the middle then goes massive at the end, as a ponytail in the wind you would have though it would all blow one direction and look fairly linear, not wavey like that. Nice design on the sheathe as well btw. Backgrounds simple but its quite nice, like the clouds revolving round her, rather dramatic. Needs a fair bit of work.
I wanna see her face. Good job, pal!
very good perspective peice
very nicely done dude
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