While I can tell you put a good amount of effort into it, the way you did the shadow work makes it seem as if there were no direct source of light hitting the caricature, causing the general aesthetic to look somewhat flat. You should do the shading according to where the light is coming from. Also, the design of the pyramids looks very two-dimensional. However, despite it's flaws, I do see a lot of potential for improvement. Keep up the good work and be sure to check out my art as well!
crap i guess i messed on shadows and everything else look not as good as it suppose to be. TvT thanks for the advice. no wonder this was not doing as well . compered to my other pieces
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