okay, just caught onto this today and...
wow. just wow. I mean, the dialogue could use some work (even proper people allow themselves to be politically incorrect sometimes), you know, like... a little cussing, would help. say... "What the fuck is that?!" I mean, last panel of page 7 kind of said that without the words, but0-0000----
aaaahhhh-uhhh-ehmmm.. are these, like, yours? originally? like you drew them and colored them and stuff? because even if you didn't, ilt looks like a goodish, semi-typical hentai comic so far. tentacles, check. multiple girls, check. girls with weirdly-colored hair, check. at least one cumshot within the first ten pages... well, that's kind of new. just the wording could, like... slack off a bit.
Well thank you for such long review. Yes this piece made by me, but it's about 4 or five years old.
how is this rated <A>? i dont get that. but its decent art, im not really suprised about it.
sorry buddy bad review.
Don't sweat it, friend. Here on http://www.newgrounds.com I'm being treated like dirt every-now and then so learned to not give a damn about comments made by some underage kids.
But you right about one thing: this piece supposed to be rated 'A'. I guess I forgot about that "tentacle rape" scene at the first panel.
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