I just don't get why people even click on your stuff or submissions with an M(or A) in general if they only intend to bitch about it. Don't try to bring anyone else down with your own bigoted opinion regarding the material- it's not like the artist is depicting anything truly harmful or disgusting, its just pixels/ink on a digital/paper format.
Toward the page itself; good shading and attention to details. Amusing enough seeing the character argue with her creator- I haven't seen that done often enough to make it overdone. Getting so many bodies to look like such in the fourth panel must have been time consuming, but you did it fairly.
In color would probably bump this up to the final star, but something is lacking in plain black and white. Overall, a good page.