I just don't get why people even click on your stuff or submissions with an M(or A) in general if they only intend to bitch about it. Don't try to bring anyone else down with your own bigoted opinion regarding the material- it's not like the artist is depicting anything truly harmful or disgusting, its just pixels/ink on a digital/paper format.
Toward the page itself; good shading and attention to details. Amusing enough seeing the character argue with her creator- I haven't seen that done often enough to make it overdone. Getting so many bodies to look like such in the fourth panel must have been time consuming, but you did it fairly.
In color would probably bump this up to the final star, but something is lacking in plain black and white. Overall, a good page.
Thank you for a great review, buddy. :)
Suggestions? Hmm, lets see.
The author's self insert keeps acting out the author's misogyny and the girl cries and is probably raped or some other creepy shit. Then the author's self insert marries someone who wants a green card and is promptly divorced which leads to him to getting hit by a bus.
Go crawl back under the bridge you came from...
he shaves her pubes and forces her to eat them. then makes her piss in a dog bowl, drink it and vomit over her snatch. then he cuts her head off and uses her hair to mob up the mess....
nah, we need something more original...
(great artwork. the B&W keeps the focus on the story. the characters are great. nice work!)
he rapes her and showes her a lesson.
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