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An alternate version of Nene as if she were living in alternate history 19th century steampunk Victorian England.

Drawn for the Pico Day art contest.

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Nice work!

It looks like a TF2 character.

Good

I liked the drawing, it's pretty cool, the colors are very beautiful, the lines and shapes are OK, I liked the character, she seems very strong, but not kind a girl, she seems a man... (ugh.)

Also, I liked the background, it's very well made, I think it fited really well to the colors, and the brown is a great color for a background... Also, I liked the effects in it, it gave me a great impression, kind of remembered me of the NG level auras...

The drawing was pretty cool, I liked the colors, and the shapes, you made a nice job, but, as I see your other drawings, I know you can do a better job, you have a great potential, keep it up, always try to improve your skills... ;)

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Roger

Aigis responds:

I'd really like to know what about the drawing made her "(seem) a man".

I can't figure out a way to write that sentence in such a way that doesn't sound snarky; I actually do really want to know.

Good

A good picture, I especially like the face with that equipment.

However, I think the arms are a bit too thin, especially compared to the legs.
Okay, legs are a bit thicker than arms normally, but here it looks rather strange.

Also I think the background could use some more work. I think you based the background on the newgrounds logo, but in those brownish colours it doesn't work too well, in my opinion.

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Lumpy limbs

Hmm, this piece seems indicative of some of the issues that we have had with previous pieces - the thighs are still a little far apart for my liking and given a chance, I'd like to see them a little fuller figured, as it might appear more natural. I'm not sure why you've gone with the lumpy look to the legs and arms and perhaps these need rounding a little more, as the edges can appear quite angular at present.

I love the wicked grin and the menacing setup of the equipment, which reminds me of a rogue in D&D with some sort of bionic arm. I think that there could be a little more detail included here just to highlight this fact, but other than that it'sa good image.

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Aigis responds:

She is wearing both a shirt and pants. They are a noticeably different colour to her skin colour, which is very pale green.

Awesome!

Great art piece, it's obviously very well-drawn and I like it quite a lot. Good job on this :D.

The colour scheme was a brownish-orangeish type colour scheme. This works really well for the submission, however, I don't think the head should be a totally different colour from the rest of the picture. Maybe you did this to make it stand out (since pale green stands out a lot around the brown/orange colours) and make it the centre of attraction, but I think it stands out too much and the contrast between the colours is too much. What's wrong with normal skin anyway? :P. The shading was a little weird around the legs but overall I was very impressed by the shading, and the texture was good in all, although the hair could use more texture to it.

The picture itself is drawn pretty well. Probably, what I liked the most from the whole picture would be the facial expression of Nene. It fits with the title flawlessly. Still, as sixflab said, the arms and legs look weird and the wrong shape.

The background was great, and complimented the foreground very well. The only thing I'll complain about would be the contrasting colours in the foreground such as the yellow glove, yellow shoulder thingy and pale green face, which don't fit at all with the brown background.

Overall, I liked this submission. The face expression says it all, the background is fitting, the colour scheme is fantastic, shading is great, texture is good and the picture was well-drawn. Just work on fixing up those arms/legs (mostly the legs, to be honest) and not keeping the colours which stand out too much. Keep up the good work.
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