This piece was a lot of fun. I really enjoyed making a song that everyone could try while they are at work and thought it would be nice to post it along the disco ball.
Every time I look at it I remember all the fun I had in Dallas and around the country during the Million Mask March!
Very nice
So i found this one to be pretty nice and even found it to be artistic with the color element all the grouped element here came off well so very nice work indeed i really like this as a whole some good artsy style here keep up the good work
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I do like both poetry and imagery here, both in different ways, but both of them together... it's quite a contrast! Freedom of expression and sexuality for sure, but feels like that part's giving the wrong image in regard to the text above; since it's about so much more than just that. Comes off more superficial than intended, I think. Something a bit more monumental might fit the text better? It's a bit small and difficult to read too, until you zoom in. I feel like this could have been two images. One where the text is the focus, and one with the rest of it. Nice work with both bits otherwise!
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If you have suggestions as to how I could fix or add to the poetry I would love to hear. Considering this is a universal topic I would love to know what you could add to the conversation from your personal perspective.
I feel the power of my pen is beginning to formulate a new path, all because CyberDevil noticed an inconsistency, It is so wonderful to have friends like him. He will read a whole page just to yell TYPO! *That is the best of buds in the world!* They only make them like him once in a generation you know. You will never find another like him; anywhere. If you do; you have to ask if they know CyberDevil; and if they don't; we have to ask them why....Everyone should know the man!
"Something More Monumental!!" Yes my friend I will take that and drive my pen to canvas.
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