hey hey i have some ideas here how to improve your art in general
first - anatomy! really important, i can see that you have some understanding of it but there's always a way to get even better
second you need to pick one focal point, or one "theee most important thing" in the picture, a clear "selling point" that everyone will look at first. it would be the most contrasting one and would be very clear. On this one i feel like there's too much different things going on, i kinda wasn't sure where to look at first, and it shouldn't happen. I can reccomend an amazing book for the artists - drawing on the right side of the brain" - you will go miles with it in a single week, i promist you won't regret it. Get it and use the heck out of it.
I can see that you are very passionate about your art but you need a bit more technical skill to be able to express it in a more effective way, the book i mentioned will help you in the shortest time i know of.
Thanks for tuning in...Keep watching...things only get better from here!
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