While I do like hermaphrodite porn/hentai, this could have been much better. Here's what's wrong:
-The pose, while dynamic, doesn't seem to have any sort of reference. Then again, I could be wrong.
-The right leg's lower half is misproportioned.
-The left arm has questionable construction.
What isn't really necessary, but could help:
-Some shading would be nice.
Finally, The good:
Here's hoping you take the time to work on your posing and construction.
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